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Post by justinlynch3 on Sat May 29, 2010 11:39 am

Part 4 of "Phoenix and the nightmare from hell" is up. The mini story is completed.

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Post by Chulance on Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:10 pm

HOLY EFFING AWESOME!

BEST FANFIC EVER FOR HU! GOD< that was soo epic. I read it all in one go, a tragic story, then Sandra vs Milo I like HOLY SHIET< Sandra is epic!

daayuuuum! Sindus man..that barstard.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:54 pm

Hey man, thanks Very Happy

I posted it, and like nobody replied about it... I was starting to worry people didn't like it. Razz

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Post by Chulance on Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:54 pm

I just got back to day.

Had some stuff to do IRL> I loved it myself

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Post by justinlynch3 on Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:57 pm

Whoo, cheers man. It's always good getting feedback, even if it was just a short story. Now if Drac and Lol would check it out.

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Post by Chulance on Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:01 pm

lol dere lazy.

Man you knew all of Milo's powers off head, and Sandra was epic. Time stopping, phoenix flames.

Poor Soldiers, this is what the explosion future from HU should have been. But question after Milo exploded did he die? Cuz he was never seen after the explosion, or did he leave earth or something?

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Post by justinlynch3 on Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:20 pm

Well the idea for the story purposes was that he died. Now if I wanted to make something out of it, I could of said he did survive and leave Earth.

But for this story purpose, Milo exploded, taking out himself, a entire city, and all but 4 of the SXM.

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Post by Chulance on Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:22 pm

Ah no it's cool.

Your story, was just curious.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:34 pm

No prob.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:27 pm

Chu, and to whoever else enjoyed "Phoenix and the nightmare from hell". I'm gonna be creating a continuation to the story titled "Death and rebirth: Phoenix's rage".

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Post by justinlynch3 on Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:31 pm

3 parts made, 4th almost done.

I can post what I've got, or wait till I'm finished and post the entire thing.

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Post by Chulance on Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:47 pm

Post the whole thing.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:50 pm

Alright, that'll mean a longer wait on your part as it's not finished yet. This story is running past 4 chapters, so it's longer then the first part.

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Post by Chulance on Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:52 pm

No problem man. I enjoy reading it all at once, and make sure to check out the chat box, and rp some time lol.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:57 pm

lol (Had to go to the bathroom, sorry)

Will do, I hope you'll enjoy this one like you did the first part.

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Post by Chulance on Wed Jun 09, 2010 8:42 pm

Can't wait for this story. Very Happy

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I'll see if I can get it finished up by tomorrow. To late to go writing now.

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Post by Chulance on Wed Jun 09, 2010 8:49 pm

kk

Imma write my own as well. Very Happy Should be good lol.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Wed Jun 09, 2010 8:54 pm

Cool.

Should be fun to read.

I may do a third part to this story in the future.

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Post by Chulance on Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:05 pm

lol.

Epic story.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:25 pm

So, we had 4 heroes remaining in the first part.

Abigail.
Sandra
Dave
Yamairo.

Now, we're down to 3. So who dies this time. Suspect

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Post by justinlynch3 on Thu Jun 10, 2010 3:21 pm

Well, it's mostly done.

7 chapters, ending off with a opening like the first part. Will read though then post after supper. So Chu, your wait is drawing towards an end. Smile

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Post by Chulance on Thu Jun 10, 2010 3:41 pm

KK should be good

Remember to post tho

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