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Post by Chulance on Fri Mar 11, 2011 7:57 pm



Long ago, the four nations lived together in harmony, then everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked. Only the Avatar, master of all four elements could stop them, though when the world needed him most, he vanished. A hundred years passed, and my brother and I discovered the new avatar, Aang. And although his Airbending skills are great he has a lot to learn before he is ready to save anyone. But I believe, that Aang can save the world.

"Imbalance. a lack of balance or state of disequilibrium; "a hormonal imbalance""

The Four Nations relationships have shattered ever since the War started by Fire Nation over 100 years ago. Due to the efforts of Avatar Aang the Air Nomads have once again populated the earth. However many distrust, and disuse the Fire Nation for there crimes, some going as far to form factions to go against Fire Nations. The Perseuction did not there after Prince Zuko took over the Fire Nation, determined to reform the fallen nation, and seek redemption for his country, there were still dissidents those who were loyal to the Phoenix King, and were determined to prove fire was the superior element. These factions were brought together by Azula, Zuko managed to work with Aang, and the others to bring her down but the faction remained, and continued growing, and years after his death the possibility of a Civil War amongst the Fire Nation is rising.

A Continuous stream of problems arise, the balance seemingly shattered despite the War having been over. Humanity has come together forming a single capitol known as Republic City, the center of the Nations, and the most highly advanced culture on earth an unofficial world trade center, for people from every nation. However within the streets of Republic City an Anti Bender Revolution has been rising blaming not only the Fire Nation, but benders in general, some even having paranoid beliefs that the Avatar will one day turn on them.

With these beliefs, it seems the world is only spiraling downward despite advancements in all areas, the ending of the War has placed the world in an even worse state. No longer is there one common enemy to unite against, bonds, and trust have been shattered forever. Can even the Avatar mend the world, or is Nature's Final Countdown begin? Rumors of another War have begun, and it seems the perpators of this second Nation war will be the Earth Kingdom who believe the Fire Nation must be punished for there crimes against the world, It seems many members of the Water Kingdom, and reviving Air Nomads support them. To make matters worse the royal family in the Earth Kingdom has been divided on this issue of war, and vengeance.

Now the world is in a state of despair, Imbalance uprising. The World needs the Avatar now, more then ever. Just as the world seemed to be on the verge of no return, what with the previous Avatar having vanished, murdered at the hands of the anti bender revolution, a new Avatar has came about. The Son of the King of the Earth Kingdom, now sixteen, this carefree teenager is the key to the salvation and liberation of the Nations. With problems arising all across the globe can he mend the world, when even his own family is in disarray, while his brother his polar opposite has turned against his brother. Now amongst the chaos a Cain and Abel situation arises, the battle for the Fate of Nations, for Nature itself begins!



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-Everyone should have original characters, you can have relationships to Cannon characters if you choose.

-Any Questions ask, Republic City is steam punk, but around the world Steam Punk technology is not going to be very popular except maybe a train system.

-I call the Avatar, now let's have fun.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:14 pm

*A man is seen wondering the lands alone, he walks until he reaches a rock in the middle of seemingly no where, then sits down.*

...: Relations seem to really be falling apart. At least out here, I can take a break from it all. A war is coming though.

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Post by FunnyGuy on Sat Mar 12, 2011 11:33 am

* A young man, that appears to be not much older than eighteen is seen with a group of other guys his age. His name is Kai, and he has black low cut, but spiky hair. He's the most tan in the group, but that's because he gets the most sun.*

Kai: So are we gonna beat the shit out of these Sand Benders or what?

Lee: Hell yeah!

*Lee was one of Kai's good friends, and his hair was much longer than the other two, being down to his mid back. His hair was brown, and he had chin strap styled beard.*

Kuzo: We need to get to the desert first numb skulls... *looks around only to spot a man sitting on a rock.* And stop blabbing about it, before someone asks questions.

*Kai and Lee look at Kuzo before looking to the loner. Kuzo was possibly the most calculating of the group, and the possibly the most level headed. He was bald with black Air Nomad tattoos on his body.*

Kai: Those assholes deserve it though. I can't wait to see the looks on their faces when we own them. And what's one guy gonna do about it? He's just sitting on a rock talking to himself.

Lee: If he hears you and happens to be an Earth Bender, that rock might be headed for your face.

Kai: He can bring it!

*Kai yelled just to sound like a badass before turning around and heading off as Kuzo just shook his head following, and Lee just snickering before following as well.*


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Post by Chulance on Sat Mar 12, 2011 4:14 pm

"A teenager sat down sipping a cup of water, in a massive palace in Ba Sing Se, son of the Earth King, he was eager, his brother Nagunte jeleous as ever, though brothers they were polar opposites, often seen in the arguments involving the Royal Family over the descision to go to war with the Fire Nation for there sins commited by there ancestors, however many noted the hatred that ran through the nation, the Avatar Kyoshu brother Roshan sat outside on the ceiling of the Palace, a celebration party was being thrown by King Minzeh in his honor."

Roshan: I am the Avatar! I am the Greatest Bender in the world, Imma save the world! Hell yes I is! Now its time to save the world Avatar Roooshan! Very Happy

"Below people were partying Ba Sing Se was one massive party, music was blaring, instruments were being played skillfully, the finest food was being served, even the less financial members of the Earth Kingdom were celebrating, Roshan stood on the palace eating delicious food. Some girls called out to him."

Girls: Oooh Avay Roooshaaan! Very Happy
Girl 2: Ooh he's rock hard like his bending!! OOOH AVa
Roshan: Hehe! Very Happy Oh I love this. Very Happy

"Roshan leaps forward going to join the girls to flirt with him, while another man walked a teenager a flicker of flames danced across his hands he was standing under an empty shelf sitting on a cracked table, the flames dancing across his hands, as they slowly faded away, he watched."

???: So the Next Avatar has been revealed. the Phoenix Knights will rise to the challange, the fool Danzo eliminating Korra when was a mere nuisance, now we must clash with the Earth King's royal family.

"The Firebender grins, cuffing his hand into a fist, he sends out a stream of Fire putting the symbol of the Phoenix on the ground, the symbol of the Phoenix Knights, before grabbing an apple from some fruit he'd taken, and continued to walk fire engulfing his hands."


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Post by justinlynch3 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 4:50 pm

*After some while the guy stands again.*

...: If a war happens, what will become of it. I'm interested to see how these events unfold.

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Post by lol1991 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 4:56 pm

"Meanwhile, as the party goes on, a youth wearing a green and black uniform, the uniform of the Dai Li, is seen watching the party from a corner, unwilling to participate. He notices Roshan, and makes a very audible disapproving sound at his behavior. This is Kyoshu, the Captain of the Dai Li"

Kyoshu: That idiot, always making a fool of himself

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Post by Chulance on Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:22 pm

"Roshan was dancing with the girls, drinking, being of royalty, and now the Avatar himself, he was quite famous, and rules were something he tended to bend anyway regardless of status, life was one big game to him, and he considered himself the best player, but he downed an alcoholic beverage, and is happy, his father King Minzeh is smiling, thinking of how proud he was of his son, he worried about Kyoshu he frowned."

Minzeh: Oh Poor Kyoshu, him and that corrupt crew he runs around with, always so serious never stopping to enjoy life;s simple pleasures. Ah Roshan how Proud I am for you, my son the Avatar, the savior of this world, you will mend our family, you will mend the world.

"He sips his drink smiling sitting on the roof top, some of his old friends are there, it's just a quiet celbration for the King, Fire Works are going off in the distance, Belly Dancers in the street, stands set up, food everywhere, Ba Sing Se is one massive Celebration, Roshan is continuing to party."

Roshan: WHOO HOO!
Girls: Ooh Roo! your sooo haawt.

"Roshan grins kissing the girl, "

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Post by lol1991 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:31 pm

"Kyoshu is seen exiting the party. He is accompanied by two men in the same outfit as him, only with conical round hats as part of their attire"

Kyoshu: Keep an eye on both of them. I'm retiring...Soon enough this entire farce will come to an end...

---

"Meanwhile, we cut a vulcano. There...inside the crater, a beautiful city is within it it. Around the entire area buildings somewhat more advance have been erected, showing that the general population has increased. The city within the crater however, remains with a certain old feel to it. Magnificent. Eastern architecture. This was the Fire Nation capital"

After the war, Fire Lord Zuko took over the throne and forced great and many reforms on the nation. The biggest one, and perhaps the one faced with most opposition, was making the capital of the Fire Nation not just a home for the highest noblemen and families, but for anyone. This obviously meant the original city was greatly expanded. Perhaps right after Republic City, it shows the most signs of the advance that the era of steampunk has brought to the world. But at the same time, unlike Republic City, it retained its old charm and grandioseness

"Outside in the lower city, we see a young girl beat up a group of people. As one of them goes for a punch, she easily dodges and then blast him with a small amount of fire. The group runs, as the girl frowns"

Girl: Who's the girl now...

"She picks up something on the ground. Seemingly a bag of money left behind by the group. Obviously she had robbed them. Or perhaps defended herself. That much isn't made clear"

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Post by justinlynch3 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:38 pm

*After some hours of travel the man from before reaches Republic City.*

...: So what is going on today in this fair city.

*He enters the outskirts going a place to get food.*

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Post by FunnyGuy on Sat Mar 12, 2011 6:04 pm

*The trio walked for a few hours, before reaching the desert. Kai was grinning with excitement, Lee had determined look on his face, while Kuzo had an almost disapproving frown.*

Kuzo: Vengeance isn't good.

Kai: Yeah, we know this, but these guys deserve it like we said.

Lee: The faster we get it done, the better.

Kuzo: Just try not to kill anyone.

Kai: We'll try.

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Post by Chulance on Sat Mar 12, 2011 6:28 pm

"After partying around midnight Roshan had finally fallen asleep, in his dreams he had a cup in his hands, drinking, sitting in the throne King of Ba Sing Se, several semantically dressed women were at his side, and in his laps, all hugging him, a perfect paradise, the wall was littered with pictures of him clashing with various Dictators, and Conquers of all manner, his entire family was proud of him including his brother Kyoshu, suddenly the dream was distorted, as none other then Avatar Aang himself appeared, much older, taking the form of the age he died in."

Roshan: WOAH! Your Avatar Aang! Your friggin Amazing! One of the strongest Avatars ever!
Aang: "Smiles" HAha it's just what hard work will do for you, anyway you need to listen, your next element is Fire, meaning you must must seek out the Fire Sages, they are the members of Fire Nation most loyal to the Avatar, even know the Fire Nation despite Zuko's efforts have not all changed, factions against unity of nations are growing more powerful every day.
Roshan: Woah! I've heard about them, that one guy Shyu reformed the Fire Sages before his death, I learned about that, so coooll! I wanna be the best Firebender, I wanna save the world!
Aang: That's good your going to need too

"Aang shifted the Dream showing the Fire Sages Capitol in the Fire Nation, heavily guarded, it was where Korra would have learned her Firebending before her untimely death att the hands of the Cruel Futsu agents, and Roshan remembered her, he frowned looking at the temple, the then smiled."

Roshan: Avatar Aang..I promise I will do my best to be as great as you.
Aang: Don't do that, your going to be better then me Roshan, I know you, I believe in you, now then you have your mission do it.

"Aang sends out a blast of air, and with that Roshan awakens it's afternoon, early afternoon, he pushed the covers of his bed, some girls were lying around his room, a few hours later he was at the docks escorted by Dai Li guards, his brother Kyoshu was there to see him off, he'd said his goodbyes to his father Minzeh."

Roshan: Well haha, guess it's gonna be a while before I see ya again huh bro! Very Happy Can't believe it crazy, me the Avatar haha! Gonna miss hanging with the Dai Li being a rebel! Very Happy
.............
"The Fire bender from before had made his way to a temple now returned to the Fire Nation, he was entering, walking inside a man was seen leaned against the wall."

???: Hmm Riku's back, what news did you bring from your investigation at Ba Sing Se?
Riku: As you know..the Avatar is back, it is Minzeh's youngest son Roshan, the miracle of the Earth Kingdom. What does this mean for us Commander Sho?
Sho: I have no idea, I'm doing what I can, hopefully soon I will be an Admiral, I am working hard. You your mission you are a scout, and Soldier for the Phoenix Lords, that the new Avatar is in the Earth King's Royal family is a problem, but it means he will be heading here first
Riku: I'll eliminate him.
Sho: You fool, you elminate him, you'll do it, it won't be the same as Korra's murder, this could spark another war, and as you know our darkest day nears us, how many people within the Earth Kingdom that know that is unknown but only the higiher ups, and of course the Phoenix Knights now this avoiding war is something we must do, but at the same time we cannot allow the Avatar to master the four elements..something WILL be done


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Post by lol1991 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 6:50 pm

Kyoshu: Would you mind just behaving yourself while you're out there? The relations between the Earth Kingdom and the Fire Nation are bad enough without you running a mock around the entire place.

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"Meanwhile, on another boat departing from another harbor, a girl and a boy, both around the same age, and very similar to each other, are seen boarding"

Pu: Are you sure about this?
Sumiko: Got any better ideas?!
Pu: No...fine, lets do it

"They finish boarding, somewhat concerned as if they're stowaways"

After the war, Katara, one of the most prominent members of the revolution, started a grand effort to rebuild the Water Tribes back to their former glory before the Fire Nation attacks. The Northern Tribe has continued to exist separate from the world, but remains the most powerful stronghold in the world, arguably now more so than Bah Sing Se.

The Southern Water tribe has reconstructed itself back, and is a much more open to travelers and commerce than it's northern twin. Perhaps because of this, it's one of the major cultural centers of the world

However, the closed mindedness and distrusts the Water Tribes developed due to the war has lead to a very bad public opinion of water benders in other parts of the world. Often, services are denied to them simply because of that.

In a very strange twist, or perhaps some form of atonement, the Fire Nation is perhaps the Water Tribe's greatest ally in these times, the Earth Kingdom having little to no concern with them.

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Post by justinlynch3 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 6:53 pm

*After a while the man meets up with a female figure.*

Female: Hello Toriri.
Toriri: Been a while. Any new news.
Female: Nothing worth mentioning so far.
Toriri: Hmm. Fine, just keep me informed.

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Post by FunnyGuy on Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:00 pm

*It is now night, and the trio have successfully stalked the Sand Raiders. They followed them before reaching their camp. The raiders are unaware of anyone's presence until Kai is seen walking alone toward the raiders with flames burning in both his hands.*

Raider: Oh shit! It's one of those guys

Raider: It's just one

Kai: Let's go.

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Post by Chulance on Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:05 pm

"Roshan grinned."

Roshan: Haha Kyo! Very Happy Have I EVER messed anything up..THAT badly. Very Happy Don't worry bro, I'll make you, and dad proud, even my mom will be smiling from the spirit world. don't worry I'll do everything I can, by the time I get there, Fire benders will LOVE us!: D Anyway cya later!

"With that Roshan boarded the ship, guards, and some girls there as well, with that, music started blaring, and the boat set off Roshan's adventure began!"
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"Sho had left, going to meet the son of Zuko Fire Lord Kaze, trained by previous Fire Lord Monel, and grandfather Zuko, he was rumored to be one of the greatest Fire Benders in the world, perhaps the best, Sho had left he was one of the most powerful Captains, and one of Tazu's close friends, they sat down to enjoy some tea."

Tazu: Ah Sho pleasure to converse with old friends how are you doing?
Sho: Good myself have you heard the news the Avatar has returned!
Tazu: That is good, especially after the last one was murdered so brutally, such a cruel act murdering the guardian of the planet, but anyway enough talk do not worry about your promotion to Admiral, soon you will have it, Guaranteed I promise but we need to do something about those Phoenix Knights
Sho: That Supreamicist group right? Some people are scared there going to eliminate you, heck target your father Kaze.
Tazu: My Father is one of the most powerful men in the world regardless of his age, but still he is being heavily protected, aside from that I've heightened security al around the Fire Nation, but I don't want it to feel like a prison, I don't want another nations thinking were planning of starting another war, with our relationship with the Earth Bender, we need to make sure the Avatar receives the finest training available, and above all he must NOT be killed, it could be the end of this peace my father, and many others fought for.

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Post by lol1991 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:18 pm

Kyoshu: This can not end well.
Minzeh: Have some faith in your brother
Kyoshu: I'm not trained to have faith. I'm trained to get results. Lets just go back to the palace father. I'd rather you not be exposed for so long. Even with my Dai Li here

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"Meanwhile, the other boat with Pu and Sumiko has departed as well"

"The boat, as well as Roshan's boat, will boat pass by the Gates of Azulon, stopping at the Fire Nation Capital"

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Post by justinlynch3 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:25 pm

Toriri: So you'll be heading out to the fire nation Mayla.
Mayla: Yes, we'll contact again soon.
Toriri: A drink before you, a sandwich maybe.
Mayla: I've already eaten, thank you.

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Post by Chulance on Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:35 pm

Minzeh; If only you'd have more faith my son, but you are right I must not be out in the open for long, let us return.
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"As both boats pass through the gates Riku is seen on a boat, he would do as Riku instructed, and do something gathering fire, other Phoenix Knights were in the area, ready, Riku gathered fire, he knew if this mission failled Sho would reprimand him, but the Avatar posed a greater threat then the Earth Kingdom."

Riku: My fellow Phoenix Knights, loyal to Ozai, the Phoenix King, while he has passed, one day a new Phoenix King will reign, and the world will serve the Fire Nation!
Phoenix Knights: YEA!
Riku: No for the one who shattered the life of the Phoenix King vengeace be us, LONG LIVE THE PHOENIX!

"With that Riku launched a stream of fire at Roshan's boat."
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"With that after that General Fong leader of the Director of the Republic Army, had Torori brought to meet him, Torori was one of the most prominment members of the Republic Army, and Fong an old friend, invitring him over to his mansion for dinner, Fong was there with his family, greeting Toriri, escorted to a table where food was layed."

Fong: Ah nice to meet you again Toriri, how's life treating you?

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Post by lol1991 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:42 pm

"As the stream of fire hits the boat square on and launches the alarms, something of awe happens...the Great Gates of Azulon, which supposedly had been long deactivated, are ignited. The fiery nets set ablaze and stop the ships going in and out through the bay"

"On the merchant ship, Pu and Sumiko notice this"

Pu: What the?!
Sumiko: Hey Pu...look...that ship got hi pretty bad. What do we do?
Pu: What do you expect me to do?
Sumiko: We have to help them
Pu: But...this is the fire nations problem. Heck maybe its the fire nations DOING!
Sumiko: That's impossible. The Fire Nation has reformed. These are probably rogue fire benders...they can't fight them off alone.
Pu: But we
Sumiko: Come on!

"Sumiko suddenly jumps into the water. Knowing full well what she's planning, Pu jumps in after her. As it seems they've sinked into the waves...it turns out both of them are floating on an ice platform"

Pu: You don't have enough mastery yet! Don't do it again
Sumiko: I knew you'd follow me anyway

"Pu suddenly propels the platform forward with a graceful swing of his, water bending it towards Rosham's ship. Both him and Sumiko have their feet well hooked so as the not fall off"


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Post by justinlynch3 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 7:47 pm

Toriri: It's been alright, kept on the move as usual. You know me, never one to stay still for long.

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*Mayla is seen on the outskirts of the city.*

Mayla: Standing here won't make the trip any quicker. Time to see what's buzzing in the fire nation.

*She tosses and catches a small money sack in her left hand before slipping it away.*

Mayla: Always a pleasure, partner.

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Post by Chulance on Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:02 pm

Roshan: DAMN! This is Hot! I never knew the Fire Nation STILL hated the Avatar, but whatever, don't worry people there's no need to fear, the Avatar is here!!!!
Guard: avatar, do not worry we will aid you!

"The Guards quickly set up projectiles, large boulders placed on the edge, then using there natural bending abilities they launch the boulders at the Riku's Fire Nation vessel, Riku sends out another stream to destroy a boulder, and the Phoenix Knights send out fiery counter attacks to Roshan's security, while Roshan forms his own bolder kicking it into the ship."

Roshan: Dang it, what's that symbol, there not Fire Nation soldiers, but there Firebenders! Wait maybe..these must by those Phoenix guys! Come on guys don't give up!

"Roshan yelled as he formed crumbeled remains of boulders into compressed rock bullets, sending them out at Riku and some other knights, seeing Pu and Sumiko coming to there aid."

Roshan: WHOO HOO GO WATER GUYS!
............
Fong: That is good, I myself am rooted here, as you know the general populace here has a strong hatred towards Benders, many here are refugee's during the War the Fire Nation has started even though the war itself ended nearly 100 years ago, hatred lives dosen't it? Heard about the new Avatar, he's royalty this time around.

"Sips his drink."
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Post by lol1991 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:05 pm

"Suddenly, the ships launch a pair fiery projectiles at Rhosham. Acting quickly, Pu propels his sister into the earth kingdom ship, and in one swift motion, creates a massive water torrent that blocks both of them, before landing on the ship himself"

Pu: There. Happy
Sumiko: You could have been nicer with my landing! What now?
Pu: Well for starters...hello

"He turns to the guards who have all taken suspicion to the two water benders"

Pu: Lets just put down the rock slabs and aim them at the enemy if you would...who's the boss here?

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Post by justinlynch3 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:08 pm

Toriri: Yes, I heard of the avatar, I haven't gotten much info beyond him being royalty yet. I intend to learn more though.

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Post by Chulance on Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:18 pm

Roshan: Hmm Guess I am! I'm the Avatar, but these guys are still my guards, but with me e veryone's like family, anyway seems like we dont have time for Introductions, names Roshan, thanks for the help really, I think these guys are some kinda cult that loves Ozai or something.
Guard: What must we do Avatar Roshan?
Roshan: Just call me Roshan, or Ro nothing's changed, I'm sitll the same earth bender, now then the fires are lit, and I'm no firebender yet, so how do we get buy, can you two make some waves or something otp ut the fire out.

"As he says that Fire Beners start launching fiery constructs of there on, Roshan groans, sending out some boulders launching several at once smashing them into the Phoenix Knights, but more are coming one hitting there ship, then another, as Roshan, as a few knights board small vessels using fire to propel towards Roshan's ship."

Roshan: Hurry! We can't let the ship sink! Everyone we have to work together, we can take down these cultists!
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Fong: Haha what kind of fool dosen't know who the Avatar is, I know it's not common around here to LIKE Benders, but he's like the most famous guy!

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Post by lol1991 on Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:22 pm

Sumiko: I'm Sumiko. This is Pu, my twin...wait who did you say you were?!
Pu: Sorry, I can't put out these flames man. Nothing can put out those flames

"Sumiko puts her shock aside"

Sumiko: Well...lets just climb up that statue and destroy the net.

"Pu looks over at her and groans"

Pu: Should have thought of that first...damn it all. Hey Avatar...wanna go for a ride?

"Pu and Sumiko both grin before jumping into the water again, edging Roshan to do the same"

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