Re: Nikku's fanfic - 'Dragonball Evolution Must Die!!'

by Jessica Raine Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:43 pm

yeah, kinda bittersweet that it's finished...but hey, what a great ride!
and if they make dragonball reborn then this HAS to be continued.

you really are a good writer! I loved reading this story as it unfolded, and I'll hafta re-read it again one of these days. maybe we could work together and do another fanfic about somethin' else in the future.

by Nikku Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:51 pm

Yay!!

*Adds "Team up with Jessie for a future fanfic" to my "Things to do" list*

by Jessica Raine Thu Apr 16, 2009 8:52 pm

: D you really mean it? YAAAAAAAAAAAAAY~ I'll start thinking of plots and storylines!

by lol1991 Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:57 am

can I help too?

by Jessica Raine Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:47 pm

ah, sure! hmm, first we need an idea for the main storyline..
will it have us from the forum in it?

by lol1991 Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:53 pm

NOEZ?!

Lets do something different.
How about...conspiracy theory.
This guys suddenly gets jumped by another guy. Suddenly they start figthing with awesome shit powers (to be defined). Main guy beats other guy, and he joins main guy...after that i unfolds has other guy was from an organization of superpowered people that all have magical swords...and are ranked like the espada sorta...and wear bussiness suits...and are like mafia.
And then Main guy gets it by wave after wave of super guys, gets all pwn mode, and wins...or something. Hows that?

by Jessica Raine Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:55 pm

interesting. Could we have characters based on ourselves in it?

by Nikku Fri Apr 17, 2009 6:59 pm

Wait!!!!!!!!! Why did Lol quote himself?

by lol1991 Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:01 pm

Nikku wrote:Wait!!!!!!!!! Why did Lol quote himself?

dunno. deleted it
anyway, we can have characters bassed on ourselfs, but do we do it for the whole forum. If so, and since names are out, we need to go with personality. And if thats the case, we need RESEARCH!!

by Jessica Raine Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:10 pm

....I'm a little confused but ok. Ahh if everyone's gonna be in it we should just make it a roleplay!
I'm thinking I'll use either the name Shizuku or Ame for my name, they mean raindrop and rain in japanese, respectively. at least I think so.

by lol1991 Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:18 pm

Ame is rain yes
Amegakura, hidden rain village.

Also, I meant to ASK if everyone should be in it.
If not, we can't make it roleplay.

Now if its normal fanfic, we're either the main characters (I'm the bad guy that turns good right in the start XD), or we are mearly secondary.
I prefer the second option. It gives us more room to create. We already are as we are, so a completely new main characters had inovation.

by Jessica Raine Fri Apr 17, 2009 7:21 pm

mmmkay, sounds good. we should make a forum explaining this to people.
if 4 people besides you, me, and Nikku want in, then I say we make it a roleplay

by Nikku Sat Apr 18, 2009 8:41 am

SPARK!!!

A lone wolf warrior blasts onto the scene!

BOOM!!!

He brandishes his sword, slicing down various monsters, zombies and oni from Hell!

SLICE!!!

He calmly sheathes his sword and walks away as the bodies of his opponents crumble to dust!

WALK!!!

His name is Shogun Tanaka - The samurai without a past!!!

PAST!!!

Coming 2010..........!!!

by Jessica Raine Sat Apr 18, 2009 12:19 pm

haha X D

KAPOW!
AME HOSHIRYO!
BAM!
She plunges her twin blades into evil itself! FOR GREAT JUSTICE!
SPOONS!
Her dance of death transfixes her enemies as they cannot resist dancing along!
SHAZAM!
She wpies the blood from her hands then exits, laughing, in search of her next ally or enemy
ARROGAH!
She's Ame Hoshiryo- dragon of the stars! (not really thats just her last name)
ZOWA ZOWA!
coming soon to a dark alley near YOU!

...hah I was just being random. I think the name needs some work. It sounds cool yet its lame...

by lol1991 Sat Apr 18, 2009 1:53 pm

Poof?

A warrior with twin guns blast into the battlefield.

BANG!

He calmly shoots two demons in the head.

SWOSH!

He send a gigantic ice wave at the oponents

BANG! SHATTER!

The demons freeze, and are shatered by is gunfire

Is name is Akesamui no Yamairo

Comming to a death near you.

Long story story short, I made epic mistake in my name. See ookami means wolf, but yamainu means wolf in subjective sense, as in, evil, wicked, etc.
Now when I first made myself a fictional character, I choose Yamairo as nama, simply because I miss spelled Yaimanu, and because it seemed cooler. But since Yamairo as no meaning in Kanji, I am now faced with a dilema. Yamainu I don't like much, and ookami also not my fav. Yamairo I dig alot, but is wrong. What to do my friends?

by Jessica Raine Sat Apr 18, 2009 2:02 pm

yamairo sounds so cool and since it don't mean anything then I guess that just means its original X D I say use that.

Does "hoshiryo" sound too corny?

I usually use a last name that I'm pretty sure means nothing too, "miroku", which is somethin I made up. When I was creating my own Naruto character in 6th grade I was tying to make a Japanese-sounding last name that had some of the same letters as my last name so eventually I got miroku, using the M, R, and O from my last name.
for everything else I use "mason", which was actually a mistake. It's not my last name but it's what they listed me as in the 8th grade yearbook X D

by Chulance Fri Apr 24, 2009 10:13 pm

Story ideas? I'm going to do a Heroes fic wanna discuss it in the Chatbox? I want to finish my fics here first

by Chulance Thu Aug 13, 2009 1:43 pm

I miss this fic..

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