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Post by Chulance Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:32 pm

Plot: Is God real? If so why does he allow evil to continue, to spread amongst the earth, innocents killed, and violence rapidly spreading faster then the swine flu. Can anyone stop this growing evil? Crime rates off the roof with so many, can anyone save them. Many Gods are prayed to but do any of them act, Law Enforcement is doing the best they can, World Government's are scrambling to find a solution while trying to avoid going to war with each other.

Rules.
1. Humans please, want a shinigami ask me.
2. Want a death note ask
3. Chu's da boss.com. lol
4. Have fun
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"A bald Caucasian man sat down at his desk typing on his laptop, writing a story titled the Wrath of God. Said man was in his early thirties, and was wearing blue jeans, and a pink short sleeved shirt, along with some glasses to help enhance his vision somewhat, he moved the keypad, and saved what he'd written, then he reached into his desk, and pulled out a book titled Death Note."

Man: Oh Lord please help me Neil Bachley, to do your works, to do marvelous things with this weapon you have given me to serve you AND TO DO AS YOU PLEASE! I WILL FOLLOW YOU!
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Post by justinlynch3 Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:53 pm

*In a city police cars are seen surrounding a small store. Inside officers look around, a small group focused on on a body laying by the coolers. Blood surround the body, and a lack of breathing means the man is already dead. In his right hand, a gun, in his head, a bullet hole.*

Officer: Looks like he killed himself.
Officer 2: Strange a known criminal would do this here of all places.
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Post by Chulance Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:29 pm

"Neal is sitting down on Google going onto an FBI web-site, looking up the world's most wanted list, he whips out his death note, and has a solemn look, he'd only did a few test jobs, but here it would begin, he began hurriedly writing names down, criminals from FBI's most wanted dropping dead via suicides, after about an hour and fifteen minutes Neal finished writing."

Neal: Perfect..your work is being done I Lord.
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Post by justinlynch3 Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:12 pm

*The body was since removed from the store and taken away to be examined. The officers finish up their investigation a little later.*

Officer 2: Suicidal criminals... this is new.
Officer: *sigh* I'm getting to old for this shit. Come, lets get back to base. We're gonna have a shit load of paperwork.
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Post by Chulance Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:19 pm

"About two days later, several Detectives had gathered at a local police station to meet discussing the recent suicides, "miracle"s as some called them, to discuss the recent suicides taking place, however over the past two days, the criminals began dying of heart-attacks."
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Post by lol1991 Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:26 pm

"Meanwhile, in the sky flying along is a weird creature that could only be defined as either angel or demon. He's dressed in black, with bright red and long hair and huge claw like arms and lets. He has wings made of bone and pale skin with green eyes"

"The creature lands on top a building and surveys the scene"

Creature: I better get back or the human will get concerned

"It flies off again, seemingly uncaring for who might seen him"
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Post by Chulance Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:30 pm

"Neal was praying, as the Shinigami had vanished."

Neal :LORD PLEASE RETURN THE ANGEL! FORGIVE ME! I PROMISE I NEED HIS ASSISTANCE!!!!
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Post by lol1991 Wed Aug 18, 2010 7:57 pm

"The strange creature walks in on a screaming Neal"

Creature:....you sure get excited quick don't you?

"It floats over to the bed"

Creature: So...how are things going?
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Post by Chulance Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:18 pm

"Neal smiles"

Neal: Angel you have returned, things go well, I've used God weapons to wipe out 212 enemies in the past three days, Crime has decreased, the Police are investigating, but many see it as a miracle, and the FBI can focus on more matters such as gang violence.
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Post by lol1991 Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:32 pm

"The creature looks at him half amused, half wondering what drugs is the guy on"

Creature: I've said so before, my name is Magnums. I'm a Shinigami...and that thing is a Death Note, not god's tool....whatever, I'm glad you're pleased, but be careful of getting caught
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Post by justinlynch3 Wed Aug 18, 2010 8:45 pm

Officer: That's all we can tell you at the time detectives. These deaths are strange. I can show you the records of the past few days, something may be able to help you.
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Post by Chulance Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:14 pm

"Neal nods"

Neal: Of course Magnums, and again with the tests? I know this is God's weapon, and you are Angel. You like apple's correct? I purchased a fruit dish, it's in my kitchen feast on it, soldier of God.
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Detective: Several Suicides, all be the FBI's most wanted criminals, then ..heart attacks..all random and all around the US, even some Mexican criminals targeted, it's...like a massacre, the hell is going on.

"Turns to partner whom justin can control"

Detective: Any ideas?
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Post by justinlynch3 Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:22 pm

Detective 2: No sir, these are indeed strange occurrences. You haven't withheld any info at all right sheriff.
Sheriff: No sir's, we're just as stomped as you guys on this.
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Post by lol1991 Wed Aug 18, 2010 9:25 pm

"Magnums raises his shoulders and floats down to the kitchen to get the apples"

Magnums: That kid is insane. Good for a few laughs though
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Post by Chulance Thu Aug 19, 2010 5:00 am

"The detective heads outside with his partner, he pulls out an apple pie from Chick fil A, and starts to eat it, as he sits in the passengers seat."

Detective: You can drive, I'm going to review my notes, so far I've concluded the target must have some sort of biological weapon, and this is clearly vigilante justice, so we need to find everyone who's a target of gang violence, and such, also anyone working within the science department.

(The detective(mine is named Ryan, yours is Justin. Ryan is a girl, no joke lol, a mexican, black hair, FBI suit that's it.)
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"Neal smiles, and drinks his "Holy" wateR"

Neal: Thank you..for this opporunity.
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Post by justinlynch3 Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:50 am

*The detective gets into the drivers seat.*

Detective: I hoped we'd learn more from the police, but not being equipped to handle cases like this, it's not surprising they don't know much.
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Post by Chulance Sun Aug 22, 2010 8:57 pm

(THE DETECTIVE's number is justin, mine is Ryan a female detective."

Ryan: So Justin what do we do exactly? People dying from suicides then Heart Attacks, no clues, but the public is either shocked, or happy about the killings, we need to learn how the killer operates, perhaps it has some sort of virus, so why don't we use an inmate to perform a crime, if he dies, then we can rule out a virus.
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Post by justinlynch3 Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:05 pm

Justin: Not a bad idea Ryan. The criminals at the jail house are only small time crooks, we'll get someone from the main prison.
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Post by Chulance Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:13 pm

Ryan: Alright then, I'll head to the station, do some interrogation of the police officiers, meet up with me in an horu with the criminal.

"Heads back inside the station."
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Post by justinlynch3 Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:33 pm

*Justin leaves heading to the prison. Upon reaching the prison, he shows hid ID to get inside, and heads to the wardens office.*
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