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Post by Chulance Thu Mar 12, 2009 5:24 pm

I've decided to post it here I didn't know if I would continue writing it . I've been posting it on two boards and it's quite good. I could always use more characters here's Chapter 1

Chapter 1 The Beginning
Many years ago way before the story of the legendary Z fighters Goku, Vegeta, Krillin, and many other powerful warriors. This happens hundreds of years before them a thousand years before them to be exact. This is the story of a powerful warrior with large amounts of potential possibly the strongest person ever to exist. Such power had never been seen back thing such ripe and destructive power, nothing in the universe had every experienced something so violent. This is the legend of the first Super Saiyan the most powerful fighter to ever live.

A teenager was seen walking down a street he was wearing blue Jean pants and a white short sleeved T shirt. He had light brown skin and black spiky hair. He was wearing some torn up white gym shoes with blue streaks on the right and left side of both pairs of shoes. He had a wide smile on his face and a brown tail wrapped around his waist. He wore a metallic wrist band on his right hand and was whistling as he walked down the chalk white sidewalk. This Teenager was an elite Saiyan warrior named Cabbon.

He lived on the planet Saiya which was the home of one of the most powerful species In the galaxy Saiyans. Not only where they one of the strongest species they were also one of the most intelligent species too. Although not nearly as smart as the Tuffles they lived on the planet Tuffle which was close by planet Saiya. Anyway Cabbon was having another seemingly normal day well normal for a teenage saiyan that is.
He was going to meet up with the rest of his team back than Saiyans where assigned teams of three or five. Lower-class saiyans were on teams of five while elite saiyans had teams of three. Their job was simple they were hired to kill whether a single person or an entire planet, sometimes they were hired to destroy entire planets. There were only two jobs for a Saiyan a fighter or a leader the later was something only one saiyan could have.

The leader was known as the king of all saiyans and the current strongest Saiyan in the universe. Every three years there would be a tournament the winner would be the king of all saiyans. The new tournament for king of all saiyans was in about a week many saiyans were excited even one’s who had no hope of winning the tournament. This year Cabbon was determined to win the tournament if he became king he might be able to order the Saiyans to search for his father.

About five years ago a few weeks after his thirteenth birthday his dad had been ordered to go on an extremely dangerous mission. Of course his mom didn’t want him to go but she couldn’t stop him and he went on the mission alone with one partner. Cabbon spent months awaiting his return until two saiyans came to his once and told him and his mom that he had disappeared and they had done their best to find them.

Cabbon went to ask the king if he could search for his father but the king did not give him permission stating he could not loose another powerful saiyan. When he asked what the mission was that he sent his father on the king stated it was classified information. From that day on he began to develop a great dislike for the king. He planned to one day leave planet Saiya to search for his father but if he disobeyed the king he would be classified as a criminal. His search would not go well if he had to constantly battle authorities . He had to become king so he could begin to search for his father and he wouldn’t need permission.

He stopped thinking as he arrived at the rocky area where he told his other two team members Rita and Kenshi. He saw them training and smiled now he could begin his training so that he could win the tournament!

“Cabbon you finially made it me and Rita where just training for the tournament” He said

“”We’ll I’ll rest now right now Cabbon you can spar with Kenshi” She said with a smile as she walked over to sit on a rock.

“Now than Kenshi let the fight begin!”

Cabbon smiled disappearing as he charged flying at Kenshi doing a powerful punch as Kenshi moved at great speeds grabbing Cabbon’s hand, moving at quick speeds he pulled Cabbon closer towards him than did a knee smash to his stomach. Cabbon opened his mouth doing a mouth blast unleashing a blue blast of destructive ki out of his mouth hitting Kenshi point blank the explosion from the blast creating a mini smoke screen causing debris to scatter.
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Post by Jessica Raine Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:29 pm

cool!
I wish I was a saiyan
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Post by Chulance Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:36 pm

I've got more chapters let me post them up it's a good story it starts out okay but it gets much better.

Chapter 2: Hidden power
The debris began to clear as the dust cleared from the blast noise was heard and it grew louder until the smoke finally cleared. The two Saiyans were fighting full force doing punches and kicks until Kenshi did a powerful kick to his ribs causing him to cough up blood as Kenshi kneed him in the face and elbowed him in the neck sending him crashing into the ground. Rita got up from the rock she was sitting on laughing.

“As always Kenshi wins”

“Of course I always win Cabbon your pretty strong but you can never beat me” He said smiling

Cabbon lied down leaping up flying at Kenshi at great speed the later moving at quick speeds did a spin kick sending Cabbon flying into a giant boulder which broke into pieces collapsing on him creating a crack in his metallic bracelet.

“Come on Cabbon give up you can’t win sure your improving but it will never be enough to beat me I actually have talent for fighting” He said with a smile

Suddenly Cabbon burst out the rubble powered up his pupils disappearing as he charged at Kenshi doing multiple fast punches and for a second a golden aura surrounding Cabbon when he did a powerful punch which sent Kenshi flying backwards through the ground as he was slammed through multiple boulders until he finally crashed into a boulder which collapsed on him.

Rita was shocked at the punch Cabbon had just done and the incredible power she had sensed from him.

Cabbon was shocked at the power he had just used” Was that from me?

Kenshi emerged from the rubble scratched up and some blood was dripping from his right arm” WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That’s one of the strongest punches I’ve ever seen!

He leaped in the air landing a few feet away from Cabbon” Is that some new technique or something1 If it is you’ve got to teach it to me! He said

Cabbon looked confuse” I don’t know what happen their was this short burst of energy and I saw this yellow light for a second when I did that punch” He said

“you might have some hidden potential you should visit Makane he can unlock people’s potential”

“That’s a good idea Rita I’ll go find him If I do have hidden potential I should unlock it before the tournament” He said as he jumped in the air flying off.

Minutes later Cabbon continued flying as he was heading towards the village where Makane lived an old, powerful, and wise Saiyan. He smiled as he enjoyed the wind in his face and the fact that he might have hidden potential. He knew if he had some hidden power he had a much better chance of winning the tournament and becoming king!


He smiled as he began flying lower to the ground until he arrived in the village. He began walking towards Makane’s house knocking at the door at first hearing no answer until the door opened on his own. He heard a deep voice “ Come in young one”
Cabbon entered the dark room as suddenly their was a bright light in the room and he could see a muscular light skinned man with a long gray beard. He looked at Cabbon and suddenly a chair appeared behind him

“Sit young one”

Cabbon sat down in the chair” Makane I think
“ you have hidden potential young one I already know why you’ve come I sensed it”
“Than can you unlock it for me!
“No young one you have already unlocked your potential but something is blocking it you must figure it what is stopping you from tapping into your true power and eliminate it” He said than waved his hand and Cabbon was suddenly outside Makane’s house.
“ Something is blocking my potential but what?”
He flew in the air going back to his house he had to figure out what was blocking his potential.

Meanwhile in a dark alley
Two men spoke to each other.
“Father we cannot allow him to unlock the power we must kill Cabbon”
“ We shall son but he will never discover what blocks his power and we will take advantage of that in the tournament”
“That’s too long if he unlocks his power millions may die! We must kill him now “
“No we must wait until the tournament you can kill him their he will die in the tournament Barsong “
“Yes he will father one person should not have so much Power I must complete my training “The warrior said flying in the air.
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Post by Chulance Thu Mar 12, 2009 7:53 pm

Chapter 3 Preliminaries!
Many Saiyan warriors were seen outside of a giant arena and the Saiyan council was seen handing out papers. Cabbon, Rita, and Kenshi where in this crowd all of these Saiyans where here for the tournament they had trained hard for the tournament for the tournament. Cabbon had not unlocked his potential he had tried all week but he could never figure out what was blocking his hidden powers.

“ So you never unlocked your power?
“No I didn’t Rita I’m starting to think maybe I don’t have any hidden power maybe it was just a lucky punch”
“No way Cabbon I swear I saw a golden light for a second” He said
“Yeah sure well if I have hidden power I hope it comes out in this tournament”
“Yeah use that power you used in that punch “He said smiling
A loud noise was heard “ATTENTION! The saiyans turned seeing a muscular saiyan with long hair It was one of the men in the saiyan council Marble.

“Welcome to the Saiyan tournament where the winner will challenge the king of all saiyans Raziel! This year we have many new challengers the rules are simple there are none do whatever it takes to win! Now you have all been given a piece of paper head to the preliminary area and began to fight fight fight!

The saiyans yelled running to the preliminary area where the fighting began Cabbon, Rita, and Kenshi easily winning preliminary matches. Also a mysterious saiyan keep defeating his opponents without moving the fighting continued until their were only a handful of fighters about eight. Marble came to confront these eight fighters.

“Well it seems you eight are the strongest elite saiyans you will enter the main rounds “He said pointing to a gigantic stadium.
“That’s where you will battle it out the winner than fights Raziel although I doubt any of you will beat him he hasn’t lost a fight his entire life” He said with a smile and took out a remote clicking a button that created a computer screen.

“Computer arrange the matches okay these are the rounds
Kenshi vs Tasahi
Barsong vs Nakana
Cabbon vs Yinto
Rita vs Madon

“ This will be easy! “
A man walked up behind Kenshi “I know I’m going to beat you in a few seconds!”
Kenshi turned around grabbing him by his neck lifting him in the air ”you think your tough smart mouth!
Marble sighed” Please don’t fight yet wait till you get on the stadium so everyone can see the fight”
Kenshi sighed” Right” He put him down and smiled” So when can we start the fight?
Marble smiled” now just go to the arena and prepare to fight” He said as Marble began to levitate than he flew full speed out of the preliminary area and up to the stands where Raziel was.
“ Raziel the tournament will start shortly since our announcer could not make it I will take his place” He said
Raziel smiled” Good than we can finally began this tournament” He said” I haven’t had a fight in weeks I can hardly wait”

Marble nodded flying to the stadium with a microphone as Kenshi and the other fighter Tasahi went to the stadium both ready to fight. Marble smiling “Let the match begin! He said leaping off the arena as Kenshi charged Tasahi doing a powerful punch sending Tasahi flying through the arena. Kenshi teleported behind Tasahi kicking him in head sending him flying in the air as Kenshi began to power up causing the ground to shake as he fired a beam of ki at Tasahi and their was a massive explosion creating a smokescreen in the sky.

“Too easy”

Marble: Wow that was shocking it seems Kenshi has already won in a few seconds well than time to move on to the second round than Barsong vs Nakana! He yelled as Barsong moved at great speed already on the stadium as Nakana came on the stage smiling.
Marble: Well than let the match begin!

In a second Barsong was right in front of Nakana elbowing her in the stomach causing her to cough out blood. Barsong than kneed her in the head sending her flying in the air as he powered up some energy in his right index finger firing a small thin beam at Nakana which went straight through her heart killing her instantly.

“She was a pathetic warrior you may move on”
“Another quick round this tournament surely has some powerful fighters well anyway let the tournament continue Cabbon vs Yinto”
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