Dragonball Evolution

Heey everyone!
It's been a helluva long time since I've posted on the forums and just out of a whim, I've thought "What if I was producing it?" Heck I'd obviously make it completely DB, and well... This is how the (plot/script/etc...) would've been if I was producing the film~!
(Note the plot will not be canon and thus is more of a "bettered" version of DBE. If anyone takes offense, hey. I've only heard bits and bobs of the movie and I know how messed up DBE already is)

Hell, I don't even know why I came back to the forums but what the heck!

"Dragonball Re-evolution"

[Insert fancy title of DBE]
[Fade to black]

Chapter 1:
[Lighten up to reveal Mt.Paozu, where Goku is seen to be scavenging for something important in the remains of what used to be his Grandfather's home]

Goku: *Sigh* Where is it? I must find! Kh! Why did this have to happen?
[Continues to search, until he notices a shine from an mess of debri by the side]

Goku: Eh? Is that...

[Easily clears away the debris to find an orange orb with four stars in it]

Goku: Grampa's bauble... He'd found it soon after he took me in that time...

[Kneels down and gazes into the Dragonball. He then wipes away the dust and smiles. Finding something that he can call a memento of Grandfather Gohan's he placed it into his pouch and walked out of the rubble. He then turns to the makeshift grave where his dead grandfather resides]

Goku: Grampa... No, grandfather. I'll make you proud! I'm gonna' train hard and become the strongest fighter in the world grandfather!

[One final look back at the remains of his house for the last time, then leaves into the path beyond]

[Fade to black]

Gotta sleep now... It's 3am past already What did you thi- (falls unconcious onto my bed) Zzz

That was a heck of a lot better now than how dbe started, Mr Nezi. Nice to meet ya! (ive always wanted 2 go to japan! Did u fall on ur bed or futon?)

Nice to meet you too Miss Venus~

Actually while thinking up this portion, I was planning to have Goku become more of a vengeful/bitter guy by the time he meets Bulma, believing that Gohan was killed by someone.

And I fell on my bed ^^" T'was just half a meter away as well~

Forgot... are double posts allowed? If so, then SOWEE!!!
2nd Chapter up (I'll call them chapters for now...)

Chapter 2:

[Slowly rise to reveal a part of a motorcycle racing along the side of the mountain. The humming of the motorcycle engine can be heard clearly as the camera pans up to reveal a slim shaped person wearing a motorcycle helmet]
[The motorbike then screeches to a halt and the person slips into the pouchbag strapped on to reveal a round flat radar with a dial at the top. From the center of the radar a round bleeping circle only 4 cm (1000:2) can be seen]

???: About 2 kilometres away huh... and to the west.

[quickly slips it back into the pouchbag and readies the engines]

???: Plenty of time to spare. At this rate, I'll gather all the Dragonballs by the end of summer vacation!

[The engine roars, then the motorbike screams once again along the side of Mt. Paozu][Camera from birds eye watches the motorcycle vanish as it takes a sharp turn to the left]


[Scene change to Goku walking by the side of the road. He then glances from one end of the road to another]

Goku: Ok! Training time, training time! I'll jog until I reach the next town, then do 50 situps, legups, pushups, jump squats, jump lunges and some shadow sparring for a start.

[Lowers down to a crouch]

Goku: Ready-set-GO!

[And bursts into a sprint]

[While sprinting on the road, he continues to run until a screeching sound can be heard further up and suddenly an motorcycle appears out of nowhere, racing right into Goku]

???: GET OUT OF THE WAY!!!

[Suddenly shocked that a furiously fast black object is racing right into Goku, he places both his hands out front subconsciously... and stops the motorcycle in it's place]
[The person (???) stopped all the sudden without warning, was then catapulted out onto the road]

[??? Wincing from the crash landing, then takes off the helmet and a shower of cyan hair fell onto HER neck.]

???: Ow ow ow... What the heck happened!? Did I just hit someone!?

[Looks back to see Goku infront of the motorcycle completely unscathed and fine]

???: What the..?

[Goku looking wide eyed at this girl..thing]

Goku: ...Huh?


T.B.Continued...

I like it! Sounds like it would actually happen. (by the way, are you Japanese? )

wow this is gooood!

Hell of a lot better then DBE.

Welcome, I'm Kira by the way.

Venus wrote:I like it! Sounds like it would actually happen. (by the way, are you Japanese? )

I'm Half-Japanese

@JessicaRaine:
Thanks!

@Kira:
Hi, nice to meet you Kira!
"Welcome"? I joined the forum earlier than you... by a week! So welcome to you too Kira!

hahaha ohh burn you got kira good ^_^

Neziare wrote:

Venus wrote:I like it! Sounds like it would actually happen. (by the way, are you Japanese? )

I'm Half-Japanese

@JessicaRaine:
Thanks!

@Kira:
Hi, nice to meet you Kira!
"Welcome"? I joined the forum earlier than you... by a week! So welcome to you too Kira!

A week and we only meet now?

How'd that happen.

he wasn't on for a while

he wasn't on for a while

I see.

no you don't

Kira wrote:

Neziare wrote:

Venus wrote:I like it! Sounds like it would actually happen. (by the way, are you Japanese? )

I'm Half-Japanese

@JessicaRaine:
Thanks!

@Kira:
Hi, nice to meet you Kira!
"Welcome"? I joined the forum earlier than you... by a week! So welcome to you too Kira!

A week and we only meet now?

How'd that happen.

School issues, exams, projects, courseworks, etc...
Actually my exams are REAL soon so I'm probably gonna be away for some time again

Ah