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Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
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Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Wed Sep 16, 2009 10:51 am
Chapter 1 is up.
As you can see, I've added quite a bit more detail then the rp had. I've also slightly edited some lines to make it hopefully sound better.
This full chapter had only came from the first 2 or 3 rp post.
Let me know what you think.
As you can see, I've added quite a bit more detail then the rp had. I've also slightly edited some lines to make it hopefully sound better.
This full chapter had only came from the first 2 or 3 rp post.
Let me know what you think.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:00 pm
one word....
EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Milo and Nate are like prepared! I like you alluded to Milo once having Benjamin's super strength!
Whoo if you want later on when you get to Zulan you can have a flash-back chapter of when Milo met Benjamin gained his super strength and defeated him.
EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Milo and Nate are like prepared! I like you alluded to Milo once having Benjamin's super strength!
Whoo if you want later on when you get to Zulan you can have a flash-back chapter of when Milo met Benjamin gained his super strength and defeated him.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:09 pm
We'll see when the time comes.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:26 pm
POST MOAR!`
Another chapter please!
Another chapter please!
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:27 pm
Chapter 2 has been posted.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:26 pm
MORE CHAPTERS!
1. Arson
2. Mr.Freeze!
This is the easiest fanfic! one more chapter please.....~
1. Arson
2. Mr.Freeze!
This is the easiest fanfic! one more chapter please.....~
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:14 pm
Yes it is rather easy doing a story when your following a rp.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:44 pm
Yes! It's interesting to see your improvements too!
your great writer!
Next chapter please!
your great writer!
Next chapter please!
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:05 pm
So? What sites are you posting this fic on aside from this one? If you post this fic many will be interested in the rp
So sly's
Mystics
Raziel's?
So sly's
Mystics
Raziel's?
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:06 pm
Cool, hope Lol will read and comment on this to. I'd like to hear his views. I might or might not do another chapter tonight, unsure yet.
Out of those 2 chapters, I haven't gotten past Lol's first post on the first page of the rp yet.
I have not posted it on any other sites as of yet, I may build up some chapters here first before copying them over.
Out of those 2 chapters, I haven't gotten past Lol's first post on the first page of the rp yet.
I have not posted it on any other sites as of yet, I may build up some chapters here first before copying them over.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:45 pm
That's nice! Do another chapter pleeeease!
Yeah you can make longer chapters if you want! cause me and lol looooove big posts lol!
Cool! I'll get HUE 3 up soon.
Yeah you can make longer chapters if you want! cause me and lol looooove big posts lol!
Cool! I'll get HUE 3 up soon.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:53 pm
Coming to the length of chapters, I does them to my liking. So whatever length they are, that's what you get.
I find it's better to have good average length chapters, then to add to much filler and have crappy long chapters, right.
I find it's better to have good average length chapters, then to add to much filler and have crappy long chapters, right.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:11 pm
"I does them" Yo why you getting all hood?
I'm just getting my hood on! Anyway I see your point one more chapter plese! Copy and edit rp posts!
This will be the longest fic EVER!
I'm just getting my hood on! Anyway I see your point one more chapter plese! Copy and edit rp posts!
This will be the longest fic EVER!
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:17 pm
Didn't mean to say it in any particular way, just saying, the chapters are however long that they come.As for another one tonight, no man. It's almost 1am. If I had a chapter started and was close to finishing, then I'd keep going. To just start a chapter this late, na man. I'll be all night trying to put a chapter together.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:27 pm
I know I'm playing brotha. I get what you mean mate. Crikey you know I got a brain!!!
It's only 11:30 where I am! lolololo\
*7 hours later*
Justin:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH NO SLEEP! IM FIRED! WAAH!
*Is sad for making you do the chapter*
Anyway sorry .. lolz! So far Troy, Milo, Nate, Michael, The chief who only shows up for 3 posts and vanishes, and Filipe!
It's only 11:30 where I am! lolololo\
*7 hours later*
Justin:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH NO SLEEP! IM FIRED! WAAH!
*Is sad for making you do the chapter*
Anyway sorry .. lolz! So far Troy, Milo, Nate, Michael, The chief who only shows up for 3 posts and vanishes, and Filipe!
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by lol1991 Thu Sep 17, 2009 7:37 am
I've read. Sorry I didn't post. Just read through it and all since...well...I know the story . Plus, I've been busing handling college stuff so yeah...
It's well written so far. Keep it up
. Plus, I've been busing handling college stuff so yeah...It's well written so far. Keep it up
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Thu Sep 17, 2009 5:32 pm
Next chapter is up.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Thu Sep 17, 2009 5:36 pm
YES!
Still on this site only?
Still on this site only?
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by justinlynch3 Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:31 pm
Yeah, I'll start copying when I hit maybe 10 or 20 chapters.
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by Chulance Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:33 pm
Wow!
another chapter today?
I'll comment on the previous chapter! Much better reading then the fic! Also you know Filipe's story(Mr.Freeze) is a flash back story correct?
Milo and Nate's search is great! Michael has gathered his squad and I updated some old posts to involve Michael a bit more in the earlier stage. Troy attacking Sandra and you brought in Dave.
another chapter today?
I'll comment on the previous chapter! Much better reading then the fic! Also you know Filipe's story(Mr.Freeze) is a flash back story correct?
Milo and Nate's search is great! Michael has gathered his squad and I updated some old posts to involve Michael a bit more in the earlier stage. Troy attacking Sandra and you brought in Dave.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:45 pm
Nothing said anything of it being a flashback, so I wasn't writing it as one.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by Chulance Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:46 pm
Um.... your quite wrong my friend.
If you read Filipe's second post he states his post is a flash-back since it has his attack and rescue by police. Then meeting Yamairo in the hospital and finally lying about a trip traiing with Yamairo, Anna, Fawkes, William, and Holst.
If you read Filipe's second post he states his post is a flash-back since it has his attack and rescue by police. Then meeting Yamairo in the hospital and finally lying about a trip traiing with Yamairo, Anna, Fawkes, William, and Holst.
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Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.
by justinlynch3 Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:52 pm
Chulance wrote:Um.... your quite wrong my friend.
If you read Filipe's second post he states his post is a flash-back since it has his attack and rescue by police. Then meeting Yamairo in the hospital and finally lying about a trip traiing with Yamairo, Anna, Fawkes, William, and Holst.
I hadn't gotten that far down the page yet
Seriously though, I'm only as far down to when Troy attacked Sandra. Anyway, let me take care of that, it'll all work out.
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