Re: Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.

by justinlynch3 Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:05 pm

Your welcome.

Doing 2 a day on this is easy... for you, your just putting the rp in fanfic format. Razz

If anything needs changing I've still got to be the creative one Laughing

Your lucky, with MO there's no copy and paste, I've got to create the intire thing. Doing 2 chapters of that a day is harder, which is why I only double chapter occasionally.

by Chulance Tue Jan 12, 2010 9:53 am

Thanks man anyway Chapter 22 is up "Booming Business". I'm enjoying writing this fic, it's actually fun Very Happy

. Yup I could possibly do 3 a day, if I was really into it, but 2 is fine!

As for being creative, I have to! Heck I practically had to write the entire Chapter 22. I had Ben introduced as a cars sells man, who lost control. And I explained how Zulan gets to Hank's location, and introduced his favorite food Italian Very Happy

In the rp, Chapter 22 was basically two line's minus the part with Yamairo and Hank. Anyway make any necessary edits, I'll put up Chapter 23 later today.

by justinlynch3 Tue Jan 12, 2010 10:04 am

Ah cool, nice work then. As with before, mainly some work on the grammar was all I done.

by justinlynch3 Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:42 pm

Few minor edits, adding in missing periods as usual Razz

Good job overall.

by justinlynch3 Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:49 pm

Nice.

Fixed a few things, the usual.

by Chulance Wed Jan 13, 2010 5:50 pm

^^ wow triple post Very Happy

forgot about this topic, I think I'll only do one chapter. Looking back, we use to be lazy back in the early days of HU, you mostly, and sometimes me.

So I have to add in a lot of info, and be a bit creative myself? Fun huh? Very Happy

Anyway yeah that's all for today, maybe one more chapter.

by justinlynch3 Wed Jan 13, 2010 6:00 pm

Cool.

Can't wait to see what you come up with.

I can't quite remember, but I think we had Sandra gain telepathic power quite suddenly didn't we. (my mistake if she gained that over time, like I said, I can't remember) When we get near that part, we should hint about those powers now and then, so she doesn't just gain them out of the blue kinda thing.

Also, new MO chapter is up. Smile

by Chulance Wed Jan 13, 2010 6:16 pm

No, remember Sandra's powers will be explained when we get there, because she got them due to her ties to the Phoenix Force. Most PF hosts developed telepathy, we explained that.

Plus we brought in Secondary Mutations some times a mutant can develop two powers. Sandra had an SM tied to her phoenix Force.

by justinlynch3 Wed Jan 13, 2010 6:18 pm

Oh, Ok, I couldn't remember how we introduced it. Thus why I asked on the matter.

by Chulance Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:04 am

^^ No problem.

New chapter is up, were getting to a massive action. I can't wait till we bring in Yamairo's "Death" and German! Seriously I loved rping German, too bad he's dead. Plus there's no way to revive him, it's been almost a year he died in 2011, so his body's decayed.

I might have Milo start using his power, Mental Manipulation. Anyway, Frank vs Troy.

by justinlynch3 Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:07 am

Cool... or in Troy's case hot. Razz

Very few mistakes, decided to keep it as was.

by Chulance Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:39 pm

Dang, I was in a creative mood today! I guess I did FOUR chapters, something you've never done. Razz

4 is the max limit of fanfic chapters ever made in a day, here at least. Anyway we know the plot. Yamairo's dead, Milo's lost it, Ben's on the loose, and yeah chaos has surrounded the heroes.

Man this was one of their darkest hours, this and when Samuel took Milo's powers.

by justinlynch3 Thu Jan 14, 2010 1:25 pm

I don't go past a double, and there rare. But damn, 4 chapters. Good work.

All has been double checked Smile

by justinlynch3 Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:32 pm

Added some lines to the recent chapter. Good work otherwise.

by Chulance Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:39 pm

Thanks for the added lines, and grammar correction's

New chapter up! Milo vs German is finally up!

by justinlynch3 Sun Jan 17, 2010 11:04 pm

Nice, rearranged one line as well as a few minor edits. Then just the regular regarding grammar and what not.

Man, at the current point of the rp Abi doesn't appear that dangerous where a lot of people has progressed so much further above her. But back in the early point of the rp... she was dangerous. She's only been in for a few chapters and has already attacked Milo (though he wasn't hurt cause of regeneration) and almost killed Sandra.

by justinlynch3 Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:21 pm

Nice chapters Chu. Smile

Man, Milo had bad timing, arriving from out of nowhere while Anna was right in close to Abi like that. Poor girl almost killed another 2. Razz

by Chulance Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:29 pm

Thanks the added and rearranged line's! There really awesome! I'm so glad our RP is getting made into a fanfic! :

Abigail in the current rp is depressed about loosing Dave and Sandra leaving. She was a mad-mutant back then!? Dang...she's making so many enemies! This story-line is interesting?

Why won't they comment down in SLy's place? GET THEM TOO!

by justinlynch3 Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:43 pm

lol, I don't know. What chapter are they at there?

by Chulance Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:46 pm

Chapter 13.

I don't post new chapters, till at least one person minus you comments.So there stuck with that chapter till I get comments.

Raziel's everyone hates me, for some reason. I update their. There up to Chapter 6 as of today.

No one reads it anyway. Nor comments.

by justinlynch3 Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:55 pm

Well in all defense there is not much on 13 to comment about, the story really doesn't start picking up till 14 where Troy returns and Zulan attacks. Plus, you don't want to stop posting, you may just be giving them the idea this is just another story that you quit on. Even if you post 1 chapter a day.

As for Raziel's, I don't mind them. I may continue to post DW there when I starts it again as Kima, MON, and tobi reads it. As for MO, I don't post it there, no one reads it.

by Chulance Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:09 pm

True but Chapter 13 was a chapter were the heroes gained more control over their abilities. Not the most exciting, but it was still needed. But yeah the story is really starting to pick up now with Abi, and all the chaos spreading with the heroes.

Don't worry I won't quit on this story. If you mean LOSSJ, I just need to think of more-plot line's. I don't wanna rush the story, I have a good amount of characters. Just editing some speech, a new chapter will be up sometime this month.

I think I'll post a lot of LOSSJ chapters, but keep them behind... that way I can post chapters when I don't make one.

On Raziel's I hardly care, no one comments. On MF no one comments, just here and Sly's.

by justinlynch3 Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:30 pm

Well the only problem with MF is that there isn't all that many people there, and ones who do care about fics are the same people that's on Sly's. I post there, I don't really expect comments.

by Chulance Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:18 pm

Well yeah, but still half the people at MF won't comment. There on a lot. I post it there, though.. just in case.

Anyway new chapter is up. I might post one more chapter, MIGHT!

by justinlynch3 Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:29 pm

Nice, I added one line, and edited a sentence slightly. Then just the usual. Good chapter. Smile

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