Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.

Two new chapters up!

The tension is building between the group!

On 39, does that youtube link need to be there, or was that meant for chapter 40?

The link being right at the end of a chapter is very odd.

Chu, answer my above post will you.

Maybe...you should have waited till I logged on....

Anyway, I meant for that to be at the end. Sort of an end theme-song, apparently it doesn't work. So it can be deleted.

NEW CHAPTER!?!!

Excited aren't ya? 41 chapters. I'm far behind on Sly's, Mystic's, and especially Raziel's. Anyway that's it, more information about the future being revealed. Milo got beat for the first time since he got Zulan's powers.

Tis all. Barely focused on the recruits sadly, I have fun writing as them especially Ben. Anyway can you add some more description to the fight between Future Milo, and the group?

To add on to the fight I'll need a list of ability's that each Milo processed at that time.

So...

Milo

(ability list)

.................

Future Milo

(ability list.)

No problem. man. But I really want you to write the fight focused chapters, I'm not really good at that, but here are the ability lists you requested. Although remember, try not to use the abilities Milo hasn't demonstrated, especially Frank's. Again keep Future Milo from using the un demonstrated abilities. Also don't use Future Milo's shape-shifting ability, anyway remember these abilities are NOT at their current level's.

Meaning yeah like Anna's power still needs physical contact, no Organic ice yet for cryokinetic users, and healing can still be stopped by stabbing in the back of the head. Enhanced strength is powerful, but NOT as powerful. NVM here are the old definitions.

Cryokinesis. Consists of lowering the kinetic energy in atoms and freezing them creating ice and freezing anything. He can't manipulate the created ice, instead he can fire burst of "cold" to freeze the air in his path. He also seems capable of firing thin blasts of ice that fully freezes anything that they touch.

Space-Time Manipulation. He can slow time down until it appears to be stopped and travel back or forward in time. He can teleport himself and others to anywhere on the planet. He can teleport things to other locations without actually teleporting himself

Induced Explosions. Consists of manipulating potential energy of an object, turning it into kinetic energy. This causes the object to explode. She can do it to anything, even humans, and the explosion depends on the objects size. She can also alter the energies in her body to give her increased strength

Biological Manipulation. He can control all aspects of an individuals biology, human or otherwise. He can manipulate things down to the molecular and genetic level. He can induce tumors, heal any wound, and even turn people "off" and "on" by controlling their nervous system

Precognition. He can uses his painting skills to paint future or past events. He now controls the visions, but sometimes gets them without warning.

Invisibility. He can become invisible at will. He can still interact with the surrounding or be heard. It only affects the visual sense

Weather Manipulation. She can control all aspects of the nearby atmosphere. She can aim thunderbolts directed at a specific location, create blizzards or rain storms, and conjure winds and cyclones. She can float by manipulating the wind around her.

Light Manipulation. He has been shown capable of manipulating pure light. He as used it to create concussive blasts, and burn things with either single blasts or light beams. He can also create shields of light, that don't take a physical shape, but rather burn whatever touches it or gets caught inside. He can create different objects of pure light (Like swords, hammers ect)

Telepathy. He can control all aspects of the mind. He can read minds, scan memories, and create elaborate visions. He can also send thoughts into other peoples brains to control their actions. He can also sense and block out intrusive mind skills. (For now only have Future Milo read minds)

Shape Shifting. She can change her appearance into any person she has meet.

Self Propelled Flight. He can fly at supersonic speeds. Meaning he can break the sound barrier. He can fly for a good amount of time, but can't go up to very high altitude or the will start to feel the adverse affects. He also has a high degree of control, meaning he can dodge and move very well in the air.

Rapid Cellular Regeneration. He can spontaneously regenerate any tissue in his body. His only weak spot is to be stabbed in the back of the spine, stopping the ability itself.

Induced Radioactivity. He could emit radiation of different spectrum (gamma rays, microwaves, etc). His powers can potential match the destruction of a nuclear bomb. He could send out blasts of pure radiation to burn targets and emit bright flashes of radiation to blind people or melt things. He could also send out electromagnetic radiation to disable electronic devices.

Super Strength. He has enhanced strength. He can break down walls, and shatter bones with ease. as well as rip people apart.

Telekinesis. She can move objects with her mind. She as been shown capable of moving several objects at once, push people considerable lengths, as well as deflect attacks like Troy's flames.

Pyrokinesis. He's able to generate and manipulate fire. He's been shown capable of causing an entire building to erupt into flames. He can surround himself with flames for protection and attack. He has been shown creating a fire dome that is not only large, but burned down sand.

Vectors. Abigail has what is know as vectors, invisible extensions that can be used for either defense or offense. She can use them directly for attack, or simply use nearby objects as projectiles. Her vectors are unaffected by Yamairo's powers, suggesting their invisibility is due to them being on a different plane of existence, hence being immune to time manipulating effects. However, when they attack, they seem to gain a physical, albeit invisible form.




Milo:

Self Propelled Flight (from Nate)
-Enhanced Strength (from Benjamin)
-Induced Explosions (from Anna)
-Pyrokinesis (from Troy)
-Rapid Cellular Regeneration. (from Ledge)
-Cryokinesis (from Filipe)
-Space-Time Manipulation (from Yamairo)
-Precognition through paintings (from Holst)
-Invisibility (from Fawkes)
-Biological Manipulation (from William)
-Telekinesis (from Zulan)
-Intuitive Aptitude (from Zulan)
-Weather Control (from Isabel)
-Induced Radioactivity (from Ben)
-Vectors (from Abagail)

Non Demonstrated
Bone Growth and Manipulation(From Frank)
Darkness Constructs (From Jessie)
Liquification(From Zulan)
Shattering(From Zulan)

Future Milo
*Same powers as Present Milo*

Light Manipulation(From Future Harry)
Telepathy(From Future James)
Shape-Shifting(From Future Yamairo)

Alright. Later I'll copy the chapter over to my forum and see if I can add on to it by getting more of the characters involved and maybe adding on to some fights. I'll pm it to you when it's done.

If you like the edited one, you can then simply replace it.

That would be nice thanks.

And one more thing, can you help me with LOSSJ? Like just check grammar and what-not?

Sylar wrote:That would be nice thanks.

And one more thing, can you help me with LOSSJ? Like just check grammar and what-not?

I read the story anyway, so I can do that simply while reading it.

I was gonna start on heroes later as I planned to go out to my buddy's today, but a expected snow storm has canceled those plans. So I'll get to work on the chapter shortly.

Great, thanks man. I'm glad you read the story,so starting with the newest chapter and forward? I added one more part to the chapter, telling you in-case you already read it.

sorry your plans got canceled Justin. I can't wait to see what you've done with the chapters.

Chapter checked and done. I see you already copy and pasted the other chapter.

^^ did you do the same for the new LOSSJ chapter?

read up on the new chaps. Progressing nicely

Ah, see you approved the chapter.

Your missing the Narrator comment.

Nice chapter.

New Chapter.

Um... what's going on here?

Troy: What… the? This isn’t making sense!? What’s going on.. I
Milo: CRAP!? The German he negates abilities!
Dave:WHAT?!
Troy: Were screwed!
Dave: OMG! SHUT UP!
Troy: This is that soldier from the future… no wonder I can’t use my power..[/i]

First German and Troy are out in the ocean, on a boat talking. Then Milo and Dave comes in... then it go's back to German and Troy?

You better review this chapter, that part doesn't make sense.

Well the rest of the chapter appears fine, but I suggest you either move or remove that part I mentioned above.

Troy had a flash back, I forgot to add the line about the flash back he experienced...sorry..

I see.

New chapter...

Reading.

The part where Abigail shouts "stop it" seems out of place.