Heroes Uprising: The Story discussion.

Why? She's tired of them talking about killing each other.

Oh alright.

They REFUSE to comment at Sly's...

lol.

Well lately haven't been comment much anyway, not even on MO. But yeah, I know what you mean, they just don't comment for you in general.

I know....It's sad.

I'm writing Chapter 50..

cool.

CHAPTER 50! UP!

Cool.

You seem to be making a lot more errors then before, namely .. appears to pop up a lot at random times. Don't know if this could just be a computer error or something. Anyway, I got it fixed up.

Thanks man, like I said my computer is getting screy.

But yeah..I also had AN AWESOME IDEA! There was a two week time skip after they beat Zulan, and Milo, and them joined Yamairo's team..well what if they faced one of Fawkes's old enemies? I was thinking of a dude named Ivan...Korbol with Aura Absorption. His goals are to destroy New York City, because let's say Fawkes had an attachment to the city? He can form his own group, be in a terrorist faction ,and be trying to expose specials? It can be a "movie" for the fanfic.

I wanna make it, how does that sound?

I guess. A lot of fic have spin off specials.

Bio:
Fawkes past is largely unknown. At some point, he meet Hank and Samuel, and the three shared a vision to help evolved humans. However, Samuel lost sight of the goal, and decided to go about it through force. Fawkes and Hank left him. Soon, Fawkes began traveling the world. He meet William in is travels through Britain, and later, on a trip to Japan, meet Yamairo.

So here's the deal. Fawkes was your average dude..right? At a young age, he ran away from home, because his parents were abusive. Let's say he's German..there he met up with Ivan, a man who helped him get in the gang. When Fawke's power manifested, he became special, thing is Ivan gained a power too aura Absorption. However eventually they were separated, and Fawkes met up with Hank/Samuel wanting to prevent Special's from abusing their abilities.

Well Later Yamairo came for Ivan, were he met the group, and reunited with Fawkes. However..after trying to get Fawkes's help to save his mother from prison, it failed. Ivan blamed Fawkes, and left. He promised to exact revenge on Fawkes.. Sound good?

Plot seems good, but you can't just jump into these. It's Lol's character, you need his approval to do this.

I'll PM Lol. I'll also pm you the plot line, work out the kinks with you? Then we'll see if Lol approves.

Alright then.

Chapter 51 is up.

Still no comments at Mystic, sly, or Razien's.

Now even Justin won't comment on the fic.

Well Kaede told me on Razien's, no one reads this fic, because they think I'll NEVER Finish it.

Can you go down there, and tell them I have tons of chapters made in advance, and that the storyline is good? PLz..

lol

I could tell them, but you really expect them to listen. All I can really say is that "Chu told me he plans to this this story." Which I'm betting there response will be something like "we've heard that before.*

Just tell them...all your readers from Dark wars, you do help write the fic. Tell them your the Co-writers...man plz.

But lol at the we've heard that comment.

Lol, I'll mention it.

Nice chapter.

Thanks. Soon will be getting to Milo vs Zulan. The first major fight of the RP. This HU Rp is epic..man.

I can't wait till we get to the later arcs, they will be AWESOME to read in story format. Hell, the soul tournament arc should be a good read man. That was a epic Mortal Kambat based arc.

One Arc epic for Story format..is the Civil War, another will be the Secrete Wars. Any war type scenario XD.

What arcs are you looking forward too, for story format?

I think that storyline with the Naruto based guys is going to be epic. And the whole Dark Phoenix thing.

Same here,

New chapter up.